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LovelyUndeadVam
10-16-2008, 01:46:59
Okay. :) firstly, hello everyone. :yaya:

secondly, the first three chapters of my new book are up. :D http://thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

thirdly, corrections are seeked. :P if there is something that i can fix tell me.

fourthly (and most importantly):

THIS BOOK IS MOST DEFINITELY NOT SUITED FOR YOUNG READERS.

Justeazy
10-16-2008, 01:52:25
Gaah, chapter 2/3 just loaded but I gotta go... :(
Read rest when I get back, :P

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 05:32:13
okey. :) thank you for that typo you PMed me. :P i fixed it.

EDIT
chapter four is up. :)

EDIT
five is now up. :D

Clank
10-18-2008, 09:54:17
Why have you made a new thread??

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 18:56:06
well this is a thread for a different book. mistery accidentally thought that it was the blood parade. :) sorry for the confusion.

~GH Dog~
10-18-2008, 19:00:11
I had a dream that your books were at barns and nobels and every one was aroud them

It is sad i dont have time to read that book

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 19:03:34
i wouldn't recommend that you read it e7. it has some really strong language in it and i don't want you to get in trouble. you are my little bro, after all. ;)

~GH Dog~
10-18-2008, 19:04:37
fine :(

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 19:09:12
aw i'm sorry. if there wasn't so much profanity in it i would say it's okay. :) cheer up.

Isaiah
10-18-2008, 19:16:36
we live through fowl lang. at my school
Fowl!!!!!!~!

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 19:18:25
well, so do i, but that's because i'm in high school. i dunno, if you think you can handle it, go ahead. i'm just saying that i don't recommend it. doesn't mean it stops you. i'm just warning you.

Isaiah
10-18-2008, 19:19:31
Give me the page of a bad one and ill rate
Trust me! Ill show you

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 19:23:10
http://thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

it's all right there.

Isaiah
10-18-2008, 19:28:13
Oh, well do i have to read allllll that? :P :P

LovelyUndeadVam
10-18-2008, 19:30:42
well, if you want to rate the bad language. :P hahaha. you don't have to. it's just there for readers to enjoy.

Isaiah
10-18-2008, 19:31:56
Was joking
Interesting

~GH Dog~
10-18-2008, 19:32:29
whats going on with the book, is it good so far

LovelyUndeadVam
10-21-2008, 02:19:20
Chapter seven is up now. :) hope you all enjoy it cause it took me a while. (had to do a little thinking with this one :o)

www.thebloodparade.webs.com

Clank
10-21-2008, 07:39:18
Hi I have read this one (I skipped the second) And i am surprised :o by the amountof violence, language etc. BUT I THINK IT IS GREAT! I like "grown up" books and like this story. You should really send a letter in to Waterstones and ask them to publish it!!!


:):):)

Chocbubbles
10-21-2008, 10:38:10
i'm liking this story!! it's awesome :)
i agree with Geordie i think it's good enough to be published :D

one question, why does time pass so quickly in the story? like sometimes it's like early in the morning and then it's suddenly midday :?

LovelyUndeadVam
10-21-2008, 23:34:14
choc-because she is thinking a lot. i find that when i think like that time goes by really fast. REALLY fast. i once sat in my bed, thinking about the same thing, for like three hours. i looked at the clock and was all "HOLY!"

anyways. yeah. that's why. and thank you geordie. getting ready to read yours now. some of it. i may not finish it. but i'm getting on it now. ;)

CrazyCookie
10-23-2008, 05:19:05
i read ur 1st chap. i liked it. it's really gud. :) im goin to read the rest.

LovelyUndeadVam
10-23-2008, 05:20:42
oh, thank you. :hug2: i'm glad that you liked it. i'm trying my best on this one.

CrazyCookie
10-23-2008, 05:21:08
ur welcome.

LovelyUndeadVam
10-26-2008, 08:10:33
updated: chapter 8

have fuuuuunnn. :)

Chocbubbles
10-26-2008, 08:12:05
oooo...goes to read :)

LovelyUndeadVam
10-26-2008, 08:12:29
haha :P i'm glad that you like it choc.

LovelyUndeadVam
10-28-2008, 14:18:20
old update: chapter 9

new update: chapter 10! :D:D:D:D :happydancing:

http://thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

Clank
10-28-2008, 14:22:17
EDIT- I gotta go

LovelyUndeadVam
10-29-2008, 06:09:50
chapter 11

not as good as 10, but might keep your attention and keep you jonesin for the next chapter. :D good night everyone! :yaya:

Heartofthedark
10-29-2008, 16:26:01
:happydancing: x1000 :)

LovelyUndeadVam
10-30-2008, 06:26:00
haha. thank you heart for the motivation. :P

next chapter is up: 12. HURRY! RUN! GO READ! IT'S A GOOD ONE!!

Due to the somewhat sexual content of this book, it is advised that readers under the age of 13 do not read this.

thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

LovelyUndeadVam
11-02-2008, 06:19:07
posted chapter 13. :)

thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

Chocbubbles
11-02-2008, 10:59:21
i'm with Heart :happydancing: x 8 (pretend the eight is sideways ;))

LovelyUndeadVam
12-16-2008, 07:01:49
okay, after much *cough cough* writer's block, here's the 14th chapter!

funja
12-27-2008, 06:54:19
i read what you said to escape and seeing if i could post
it let me post so idk

LovelyUndeadVam
12-27-2008, 07:38:07
HAHA! figured it out! had to re verify my email cause i had to change it.

to everyone:

my email is now LovelyUndeadVampire@yahoo.com

(oh, and, yes, i feel very, very stupid...:$:$:$)

LovelyUndeadVam
02-07-2009, 05:51:30
Okay everyone, I've hit a bit rut in my writings. I can't decide what i want to do with the next chapter, but I'm getting close to what I really want. So no worries, I'll have the next chapter real soon! :)

2 Tails
02-07-2009, 17:58:38
I love it!
http://dl5.glitter-graphics.net/pub/1821/1821855egmkrxqwxf.gif (http://www.glitter-graphics.com)

LovelyUndeadVam
02-09-2009, 04:34:58
Thank you 2 Tails. :):hug2:

Okay, a few things:

one: chapter 15 is now up. :D
two: I have created a forum so that you can discuss things and whatnot. It's real little and there's not a whole lot to it, but you can have fun with it anyways. :)