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07-23-2006, 11:48:15
This is a thread, where you guys can post stuff that u made yourself!!
Like poems,jokes,thoughts,pictures,songs....
And other people can comment on it and tell whats lacking.

07-23-2006, 11:48:56
A sweet poem by me...(Tell me if its good!!).

Love is bittersweet.
I will wait for the day we meet.
Till then ill cry all the time.
Baby you are the best and no one is more fine.

MY heart is broken,it has lost its warmth.
We will kiss and hug all day long.
Till the pain has gone.

I miss the smile,i miss the tear.
All thats left is fear.
Had we not done,what we did..
You and I would still be near.

Long gone are the days when the sun used to shine..
when i was yours and you were mine.
Everything's different and nothings same.
Life is just a lame game, without any aim.

I saw you once,i saw you twice.
I never thought that such was lives spice.

At last ,making a lasting statement
depositing a lives worth of repent
Life will end, death will come..
More so and some..
But the pain will never end.
But the pain will never end..........................

07-23-2006, 12:12:59
Hey Maniac. That poem is awsome...very touching.
My opinion...I loved it!!!

07-23-2006, 12:34:57
YoU aRe So NiCe.
BuT cOmE oN.
YoU tRy SoMeThInG tOo...

07-24-2006, 10:20:11
Hey,,,, now i have a rap song!!!(Tell me how u feel!)

They called me a cheat,
Lets meet up,lets beat em.
Lets make some heat.

<<deleted due to inappropriate content>>

Lifes good.
You are just a wolf ,
in sheeps hood.

Don't ditch me,
it hurts a lot,
we'll lie down on my cot,
and make love and make out.

This is no prank,
i am from no gang.
I got no gun,which goes bang bang.

She looks so cute,
like a 100% off loot.
I like the way she move,
it was my sorta groove.

Why did i see her,
i am now under the control,
of her pretty eyes,like big black coals!!!

07-24-2006, 10:40:52
Just a reminder: the posts must follow the rules, this thread is no exception.

07-24-2006, 10:42:37
Hey,srry,just slipped my mind.
Wont happen again....honest!!!!!!1

07-24-2006, 10:57:03
Maniac, do you like Eminem?

07-24-2006, 11:00:34
He is not my favourite.I listen to him sometimes!!Actually im not even into rapping and stuff like that.
Im more into HIP-HOP etc

07-25-2006, 15:02:08
just something i thought of

yoshi is the best, he's not blue thu,
so, yo, let's go,

if u want to know my fav heres wat u gota do,
go to yoshi & say bige, 9, 2,

yoshi is my man,
& i've come to say,
that i love him in, every way,
even every minite of the day,

boshi is the cool 1,
he's the blue 1,
& he's here to say
yo u guys get outa my way

i love yoshi, & u better not forget,
u can put that on a 1000 doller bet,
that i love yoshi, boshi, doshi, coshi !!!

happy yoshi http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/723/yoshijumpjoytj3.gif (http://imageshack.us) boshi http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/988/boshihn0.gif (http://imageshack.us) doshi http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6151/droshijy9.gif (http://imageshack.us) coshi http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6242/whiteyoshianijb5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

07-25-2006, 15:02:59
Heeeheehee, nice one!

07-25-2006, 15:06:16
just something i thought of

i love yoshi, & u better not forget,
u can put that on a 1000 doller bet,
that i love yoshi, boshi, doshi, coshi !!!

Hey , another rapped amidst us..(i hope that made sense..lol)

07-25-2006, 15:06:44
Don't worry, it did!

07-25-2006, 15:14:50
added a bit

07-25-2006, 15:15:29
You made it even better!

07-25-2006, 15:17:57

07-25-2006, 15:19:04
Neato ???

07-25-2006, 15:29:08
Dnno,i just wanted to say it.lolz

07-25-2006, 16:18:41
added a bit (again)

07-25-2006, 16:21:40
It's even better now, keep working!

07-25-2006, 21:54:39
yea another bit

07-29-2006, 11:37:12
srry a bit offtopic but: thanks for putting me in your bandwagon! i like my picture ;)

07-29-2006, 11:38:31
lol ^^.

07-29-2006, 11:40:03
Hey Supernova, you're new here, aren't you?

07-29-2006, 11:44:03
Yea,im a bit confused , how dis site works.

07-29-2006, 12:20:25
if you wanna know something feel free to pm me ;)

07-29-2006, 12:24:51

07-29-2006, 12:30:21
right, now ontopic again: i like to make sentences for a song or so, but can never get far, i've thought of this one time and kinda like it, but can't get any further :P

A sudden breeze, a glimp of light
Makes me look into the night
I look at a falling star
Wishing it never got this far

07-29-2006, 12:46:41
I saw the moon,i saw the sun
I saw everything,
and i can say that being wid u is the most fun.

07-31-2006, 16:00:11
I love to write poems!

You are a great friend,
I will be with you,
Even in the end,
Of all that we've been through.

When you cry,
I'm sad,
I don't care if you're a girl or a guy,
You are so close to me, aren't you glad?

Now you are leaving me,
And You and me are gloomy.
I guess that is the end of our friendship,
But you and me are going to stick together, just like a paper and a clip.

07-31-2006, 16:47:49
LOL,its a very cute poem.

10-01-2006, 07:53:23
I woke early one morning,
The earth lay cool and still
When suddenly a tiny bird
Perched on my window sill,
He sang a song so lovely
So carefree and so <<deleted>>,

That slowly all my troubles
Began to slip away.
He sang of far off places
Of laughter and of fun,
It seemed his very trilling,
Brought up the morning sun.

I stirred beneath the covers
Crept slowly out of bed,
Then gently shut the window
And crushed his <<deleted>> head.

I'm not a morning person.

10-01-2006, 12:35:50
I've heard that one before. Cracks me up. I hate mornings, too! ;)

10-01-2006, 12:36:36
Nice poem...

10-01-2006, 12:50:33
but u didnt read the rules,only the poems and stuff which u made urself...

10-01-2006, 12:51:41
Hey maniac!

10-01-2006, 20:56:29
I love to write poems. I can't think of any right now, but I might have some later.

10-01-2006, 22:00:44
but u didnt read the rules,only the poems and stuff which u made urself...

Before there are fights because of this, I moved this poem here.

10-01-2006, 22:05:52
This a very deep and serious love poem exrepressing the inner longing for my true loves gentle embrace...

My love is like a red red nose
that soarly runs in june
My love is like monotony
That's always out of tune

10-01-2006, 22:08:30
It's ver pretty Lilli! Have you ever thought about putting it on your signature :wink:

10-01-2006, 22:12:38
But, but I think it is sad! :'(

10-01-2006, 22:13:33
I think it's pretty...

10-01-2006, 22:16:09
Yes it is pretty, :) but sad. :sad:

Sorry Lilli, but it's only my opinion.

10-01-2006, 22:17:39
Oh, Adventure, it only means that love can be regarded as a sickness, sort of, but not a dangerous one. There, there, now don't cry. *Comforts Adventure*

12-24-2006, 22:55:41
I made another poem:)

I have a little wish,
That people would reunite,
I have a little wish,
That the world would be smiling bright.

I have a little dream,
That we could be a family,
I have a little dream,
That we could live cozily.

This is a little love,
Written on a dove,
This is a little friendship,
Written while on a trip.

Peace and love to all,
That I object and recall,
Hoping war ends,
We all can be family and friends!

12-29-2006, 23:45:51
Here's a poem about my friends
I call it

Early in the morning
I'm wide awake
Today is the day
To bake a cake

I call my friends round
James and Sam
James has got the sugar
And the strawberry jam

We mix it up
Nice and thick
A knock at the door
In comes Nick!

We're happy he came
Even though he's late
The cake is ready
And it tastes great!

12-29-2006, 23:49:49
Very nice poems, GTgirl and BeanMan :)
Thanks for sharing with us :hug2:

12-31-2006, 12:38:26
My BEST comic strip ever: http://i13.tinypic.com/33jkb4x.jpg

01-02-2007, 16:21:39
LOL! Thaz really sweet, Acasete :)

Ok, so this is a tribute to my dear favourite alien :D

Flying Been (!) Song

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
hoooooome agaaaaaaaaaiiiiin
crooooooooss the seeeeeeaaaaaa

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
stormy weeeeeeeaaaaaaathers
To a beeeeeen you,
are a beeeeeeeeeee

01-02-2007, 18:20:36
LOL! Thaz really sweet, Acasete :)

Ok, so this is a tribute to my dear favourite alien :D

Flying Been (!) Song

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
hoooooome agaaaaaaaaaiiiiin
crooooooooss the seeeeeeaaaaaa

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
stormy weeeeeeeaaaaaaathers
To a beeeeeen you,
are a beeeeeeeeeee

I think you puted too many letters on each word.
But it's ok!

01-02-2007, 18:40:32
I think you puted too many letters on each word.
But it's ok!

No I didn't, Acasete, it is supposed to be that way. Also you kinda missunderstood. The tribute was meant for Mistery. Go look at three word story ta see why I have made it ;)

01-13-2007, 02:24:08

i wish the world was a better place,
were every1 didn't kill,
to all the kind ppl here,
who olny treat the ill,
if only this could come true,
& have a better world,
without out every1 on,
the ground all up in cruled

01-13-2007, 02:51:19
A quickie prepeard...


lol disease lol disease
example is influenza
lol disease lol disease
i don not celebrate Quanzaa


Edn of song
Edn of song
it was not
very long!

01-28-2007, 16:46:11
This thread is only for GTgirl to post in.

Narrator: Some boy

I woke up from the yelling in Mark's room. "How terrible!" a voice said. "Where is it?!" another said. "I DON"T HAVE IT!" one said. I tiptoed to Mark's room and saw him crying, even if he's 18. Ma and Pa was holding a whip. They turned back and went back to my room. What just happened?

Ma and Pa was still angry. "What happened?" I whispered to my brother. "Shut up, it's none of your buisness, goofball." "You better find the silver necklace." Pa said to Mark. I dressed and got ready for school. Mark was in an afternoon school, so after I went home, he goes to school.

But this day was different. Usually Mark was in the car all set for him to go to college. I saw him laying on the floor, looking dead. "How could you?" I whimpered to Ma and Pa. "He deserved it." Pa said. A funeral was held, and everyone dressed in black. Meme, the babysitter, dressed casually in her gray dress. Ma and Pa looked at her neck, and cried in guiltness. I saw the necklace properly put on Meme's neck. Losing a brother is the sad thing, but parents as murderers is worse. "We're so sorry, Mark!" Ma said. "Sorry isn't enough. A life is what he needs!" I shouted. "You close your mouth!" Pa commanded. "A necklace is more important than a son? What kind of parents are you?" I said. Then with a blank face, I stood and walked home.

Every Christmas I visited Mark. One particular night, a note on his grave said, "You are the bravest brother I've seen."

This is not real ok!

03-09-2007, 00:00:45
The wintery skies are turning blue,
And the roses also grew,
Spring is almost near,
And it's almost here.

The hibernating bear,
And her cubs she care,
Wakes up in the morning light,
The groundhog thinks the spring is here, all right.

The gentle breeze is blowing,
The flowers are growing,
Such a beautiful season,
To have a reason....

For loving you.

03-13-2007, 21:34:57
i know ppl havn't posted on ere 4 a while, but i'll get things moveing agian for all my fav loonies!!!

i like writing songs (proper long songs) mostly because i love to sing and dance (no balla rubbish though, srry to upset n e one but i find it slopey, even though i love singing love songs)



Bridge : Why did you leave me?
When will you be back?
Are yo-oh gone for long?

You slid lost controll through a row,
You hid your shadow gone now!
Every time I buy your moaning grit,
You take my life and through it to bits,
It's not fair, why do I try?
All you got inside ya' is lie!


Chorus: This CRAZY world in,
Which I live. (waa-ooh)

(Waa-ooh, waa-ooh-ooh)
I'm lost i'm scared.
I'm crazy can't bare-it.
With out-you, Baby!
My life feels like a million dollers,
Thrown AWAY!
Some day,
You will (know-oh)






hope you liked it!!!

i woke up in the mildle of the night,
where were you?
i dunno but i still dreamt.

Chorus: of you and me together.
in our own world forever.

Bridge: and now look at where we are,
together not far apart.

i still beleved


still in progres that one, but what'ya think?

i also have writen parts of songs:

(doesn't yet have a name, thinking of one- in progress!!)

i can't deal with this anymore,
i can't concentrate.
your loves like fish on a bait,
nothin ever goes my way.

oh no nothin can go nice in my life,
not even once,
can anything go right.

Chorus: how can i be oridinal?
When every one's copyin me.
How can i be individual?
When everyone's watchin me

04-28-2007, 05:59:33
Here's my tribute to GH. Hope you like it.

I wish there was a special place
Where I could just be me,
Have loads of fun with everyone,
And make a friend or three!

I need to find a safe place
That I can call my home,
With fun to have, games to play,
And friends to call my own.

Perhaps, I thought, just one day
I'd find the perfect place,
Where people would be friends with me,
That really would be ace!

I'd love to find that somewhere,
Where people laugh and chat
About things they know, games they've played
And pics of this and that.

Then one day I came across
A site that sounded good.
That's how I found my special place,
It's name is Gamershood!!

I hope you like my poem
(Although rhyming's not my art!)
But let me please just tell you all
It's written from the heart.

04-28-2007, 14:47:40
I think this is gr8 idea to share the talents fo each ppl. Nice work and poems. I my self like to write novels and stories. I had written 2 when I was 12 and now I am writting my biggest novel. The first 2 was:

"Rock's treasure" where 3 children find a secrete map at their toys, and desided to find. One of their cousine wants to follow them and spoil their plans. At the end the three kids find the treasure. It was a book that Rock had wrote sencuries ago, when he was on he pirate ship, and his only wish was for ppl to read this book.
The other one was "The magical Forest" where agen two brothers and a sister was orphans and the only place to find food was at a magical forest, where a bad wizzard had made everything magic. No one had came out of that forsest. But it was their only solution....At the end they found the magician and become friends.
I want to believe that my best novel will be the last one I write: "The diary of love". A girl find a diary at their basement, which belong to her grant mother, and it describes her life when she was a kid, her best friend which was a boy, the years at uni, who she and her best friend become married, and the magical moment (which I think is also sad) the way this novel will finish is when at the last paragraph sais "Dear diary...I am still in bed, but I am not afraid anymore..I am going to see my lovely hasbund again, and we'll be to gether one more time...." and there is like a line at the end as she didn't finish the paragraph...

05-25-2007, 21:41:55
A little broken shop, down on the hills,
covered with paper and mail and bills,
the door had a crack,
the windows were black,
light can't seap through,
dark hearted and blue,
gum on the sides,
broken carnival rides,
trash on the steet,
mice at your feet,
nibblin' on crumbs
and to that it all sums.
mind in a hole,
not one soul.

in the little broken shop...

05-25-2007, 22:10:26
How sad it is to see,
how the world has come to be.
Once peaceful for years,
have turned into tears,
and it all is our fault,
joy is to our halt.

we are to blame,
we have our shame,
some worse than others,
and to one another.
We have, yet, to see,
how the world can truely be.
peaceful and happy and joyful and free.

yet it will get worse,
we've been under a curse,
for much too long,
and it's still growing strong.
We will see our day,
when we have no more time to stay,
but remember one thing,
together we will sing:

"joy is lifted into heaven above,
with its kindness, caring and love,
we will see it again so long as we,
come to look at earth and see what we see."


05-25-2007, 23:25:59
Im so sorry I have to write sad poems.
Even though i try to think happy things in my art, when im in it,
I have to write whats there.
Im sorry =(


Ok, All ive done is written sad poems...
Im gonna try a happy one...

05-25-2007, 23:47:36
Follow me into the moon meadow,
where all your troubles are free.
Follow the moon light to the glimmering ocean,
The star rivers, grass and trees.

Your worries will be gone,
if only for a while,
with all that empty worry space,
you'll heart soar for a mile!

You'll forget the pain,
washed away by the rain.
You'll forget the trouble,
You'll see double.

You'll be fine when you are here,
full of laugh and fun and cheer.

Follow me into the moon meadow,
where you know you'll shine
Safe, and mine...

Was that happy enough?!

05-26-2007, 01:55:38
Can you feel it?
Its the darkness within.
The cold crawling feeling
Huddled under your skin.

The guilt of something
you never did
Or the lack of confidence
or something you DID.

Sad, yes,
but oh so true
Its the feeling you get
when your heart feels blue.

And the darkness within,
can scar you forever,
so take it like it is
its now or never.

Its confusing to see
the things we dont want to
but it doesnt mean
that they arnt true.

Dont run or hide
or squeak or scream
not even something

We all have our moment
And soon we will,
sing our sad song
and forever we still.

05-26-2007, 22:47:38
On the side of the road,
a little girl waits,
for nothing more,
then her own fate.

As she sits there and wonders,
if her dreams will come true,
she reilizes nothing,
had made her more blue.

She was crushed by reality,
and stomped to the ground,
by her own little friends,
with only a sound.

The sound of laughter,
that nothing could compare,
to the way she was feeling,
she felt oh so scared.

Her life was a joke,
and everyone knew,
that that one little girl,
was now feeling so blue.

She ran and she cried,
as if in a race,
in time to stop,
the look on her face.

It had scars and cuts,
from that crash,
as if all her dreams,
had been slashed.

She was alone,
on the street,
looking down,
to her feet.

She let herself run,
on the road,
and she watched her life flash,
so it had been told.

And "CRASH",
was the last thing she heard,
what had scared her at first,
had killed that girl.


PS- im sry i made it so sad, but i have a heavy heart sometimes...

05-26-2007, 23:07:25

Once there was a goat,
he lived on a boat!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Then the goat died,
and was eaten by the sea!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Once there was a whale,
smashed by a flail!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

There was some remains,
that looked like scrambled brains!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Once there was a song,
that wasn't very long!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

It was really random,
then it was to end!
Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Made of Cyaniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiide!

Cyanide, :D

05-26-2007, 23:46:37

05-27-2007, 16:56:16
Lol :haha: Very good :haha:

05-27-2007, 18:09:52
whats THAT suppost to mean?!
lol jk

05-27-2007, 18:36:50
That means: That's a funny song :P

05-28-2007, 00:22:17
im slow 2day...

05-28-2007, 02:59:07
You should see me when I actually try and make it weird XD

05-28-2007, 12:07:32
but really,
im haveing a pretty slow week.
poor me...

but the song WAS pretty funny!

05-28-2007, 19:20:07
On the corner of Heaven and hell,
Are people that no one can tell,
if had been bad or good,
And in a line they all stood.

The devil came out and took his prize,
the one little person with evil in his eyes,
and together they gladly said,
"together rise the evil and dead"!

All the devils victums stood up in row,
and the rest were told so,
that god would come down and get,
the souls that he could not forget.

They waited there for a century,
and he never came,
So it proves that what we think is heaven,
is limbo, all the same.

So all the folk in limbo,
searching for him with hope,
never came to see the day,
when god took them a hold.

soon they all gave up hope,
and gave in to the devil anyway,
exept one little boy who died of cancer,
who decided to stay.

He saw the shimmering in the light,
and saw god appear,
he craddled the boy into his arms,
And said to this poor dear,

"none of those people were worthy,
of the treatment you will get,
they had given up all hope,
and they will always regret.

They will hear your cries of laughter,
and see your tears of joy,
and realize that they could have chosen better,
and with life oh dear boy,

They all sinned, each,
the worse that they could,
if they waited a little longer,
they'd get what they should."

Now, you have one wish.
Choose it with your heart,
And dont make a sin,
Or heaven will fall apart."

"I wish all the people,
could come to heaven,
for the little time they had,
before heaven living."

god zapped all the people,
in heaven as they dreamed of,
Wishes really do come true,
with friendship, hope, and love...

05-30-2007, 23:10:50
The girl stared at the
ground and her heart started
beating faster as the rain forms a
word that said
and she was left alone in the
lonely world
and she grew older,
until there was no more.

I typed this in a hurry...

06-15-2007, 21:31:14
Swish swash the leaves blow,
for all to see, and all to grow.
The pond under and over the sky
for all the birds and bees can fly.

The wind calms me by the deep blue lake
as if god had made it for our sake,
the whole land, swept with breeze
from the desert and mountains to the seas.

birds flying 'round and 'round,
not a peep, not a sound.
the peace and quiet is relaxing indeed,
just sitting here, under the trees.

ps- i liked the poem u wrote

06-15-2007, 21:55:54
well done :D:D the poems are great :D :hug2:

06-23-2007, 13:05:13
thank you my dear sister! *hugz* but the reason i write most of my poems so sad, is because, well... i have these moments. eveeryday. sad thoughts and depression just leak into my brain. i feel the need to write about it. its like a craving. Im telling the truth. not my favorite part of the day... but its a part of life for me.

EDIT: i know im crazy... but its true.

07-07-2007, 20:30:59
here are some poems i made up on GH :D

Dear lilli,
go to sleep, go to sleep
go to sleep my dear little carrot islander,
where you will be...
im peace and harmony (??)
without being disturbed by old little me (:P)

nobunnys around,
i will just sit in the background (:haha:)
wait for some chat,
or even the cat (:P)
maybe change my avatar?
even to a something bizarre,
when will everybunny return,
there is no fear of me getting sunburn! (raining!! )
so everybunny hurry up!,
so i can say "whats up"(:haha:)

Da jenni is alone,
if no-one turns up she might turn to stone (:haha:),
where is everybun?,
are they from London?,
or maybe from Paris,
and her name is Alice,
this poem by Robert,
took alot of effort (not),
is anybunny around?,
because i cant here a sound (:sad:)

Dear Escape,
go to sleep, go to sleep
go to sleep little kitty escape,
because we all know you arn't an ......ape (:shy:)
so go to sleep,go to sleep,
and if this lullaby doesnt work you could always count the sheeppppppppp!
one day we will find a cure,
for this insomnia is quite obscure!!!
dear Jenni sends some hugs,
so watch out for the bedbugs!!!

07-27-2007, 11:46:48
Here is one i wrote about edward teach (BLACKBEARD)

The smoke canisters in his hair made him appear in smokey air.
With him were 7 pistols and a patch box,
His hair was braided into several locks.
He only raided for 2 years,
But caused many,many tears.
Killed aboard his own ship,
and his head stuck on the mast tip.

Rate it out of 10.

The blade pierces my skin and heart,
swordfighting is a dangerous art.
I let out a sharp scream,
It hurts more than it may seem.
I kneel down onto one knee,
if I have to die then let it be.
And as the light leaves my eyes,
I think :" To the police he will tell lies!"
So why I am still alive,
I grab my sword and at him I dive.
I behead him and with a mixture of his blood and mine,
I write a message along his spine.
I look at the message written in red,
It says "At least I still have a head."

Rate it out of 10

07-28-2007, 06:27:11
JCATZ,,,your not weird,,,,,i feel that too,,,depression happens to everyone and you have the best way to finish it,,,and your poems are awesome,,,

07-31-2007, 11:25:41
Im writting a story called: The stone soldier. I will be making a website wich will keep you updated with the story. When it is up and running I would like a review of the front cover. Say Hi to your mum for me ~ace~

09-18-2007, 21:00:53
when you have a problem you cant fix
Or you have a heart break with tears to mix,
Ill be there, to help you off up,
you'll see there is another world to love.

Since kindergarden, we've been best of friends
the fun never seemed to end.
then one day you came up to me
with sadness in your eyes, i could see.

You stand slumped with tears in your eyes.
You breathe heavily and give a sigh.
"I cant stand it any more, im just too wimp
No more energy just to limp.

They laugh at me and i run away
Just because of that day.
The day that i just sat and stared
at the mirror, looking at me with no hair."

I stood there and smiled.
"it will be OK
It will all grow back
one day."

If they just laugh,
they're not your friends
we are 'til the end."

09-18-2007, 21:12:21
Jcatz that is so good!!! *feels proud of the talented sister* :hug2:

09-18-2007, 23:27:05
Nearly broken, barely whole
Words that spoken breaks her soul
Walking slowly t'wards the edge
Upon the grass, upon the sedge
Looking out on the water, she'll sigh
And softly wisper "Who am I?"

09-18-2007, 23:40:43
here are some of my photography skillz!!!






09-19-2007, 00:51:19
Nice pics, Kay :)

Twinkle, twinkle, star so bright
Shining as the only light
Moon is hiding 'hind the clouds
Wond'ring why her light it shrouds
But you stars keep shining through
How I wish I'd be like you

09-19-2007, 00:56:10
@ Jcatz....Wonderful poem!! Very talented. Keep it up! :D

@ Mcakkay...BEAUTIFUL pics! :o Love them! :D I bet Canada is beautiful!

@Simply...Both your poems are very well written. I love them!!! :D

@ All..:applause: You all definitely have talent! :D

09-19-2007, 01:46:56
thank you dear cuz. :hug2: i wanna hear one of YOUR poems. i want proof that my online cuz has talent!

09-19-2007, 20:27:33
Thanks Escape!!! It really is beautiful!!

09-25-2007, 05:38:23
This is something I had received through e-mail:

1.there are at least 2 ppl in this world that will die for you
2. At least 15 ppl in this world that love in on way or another
3. The only reason that someone can hate you is because they wanted to be like you
4. A smile can bring happiness even to someone that doesn't like you
5. Everynight at least 1 pp thinks about you b4 he/she sleeps
6. You are the world for someone
7. You are special and one and only person
8. Someone that never know b4 loves you
9. Evethough you know you do the biggest mistake, something good will come up with it
10. When you think the whole world is against you, look again
11.Always remember the rewards you had received and forget the insults

09-29-2007, 00:39:20
:o beautiful

09-29-2007, 05:51:39
thank you dear cuz. :hug2: i wanna hear one of YOUR poems. i want proof that my online cuz has talent!

Hehe. :$ I haven't written poems for ages. I prefer acting. ;) If I come across one of my old poems, I'll post it. Deal? ;)

09-29-2007, 11:31:02
Winter is nearing
I feel it in the air
the trees all ageing
whilst im sitting in my chair

The first speack of snow
it's all very exciting
the temperature reaches zero
everyone is uniting

(ahh i have to go, i may continue this later :))

09-29-2007, 17:43:35
Oh... Robert Burns is shakin' da poetry tree :D :D :D I like!! :appl:

09-29-2007, 18:03:47
yeah i shook it :haha:

10-08-2007, 20:51:24
We still waiting for the rest of your poem jenni :D

WHY??? by me :)

Why I wonder
you act that way
why so shy, so angry and hate
why you gave your smile away?

Why when I cry
you turn your back to me
why when you cry
I hug you as you never did?

Why when some good
to my side is spent
why so jealous of me my friend?

Why when good
is visit you I smile
When it happened to me
why you cry?

Why you ignore me
like I don't exist
Why don't you call me
why do you resist?

Why when your friends whisper:
"Tell her to leave.
We don't want her here can't you see??

She is nothing but trouble
look at her face
Tell that clown:
go away to another place"

Why you are with them
as you have a bad day
Why you listen to them anyway????

I want to ask you one
thing and only
Why you actually feel so lonely?

Why when people suffer
I don't feel that much
Why when you died
my heart was bust?

Where are you "friends" ???
Don't tell me away.
Why I couldn't protect you
from that doomed day?

10-14-2007, 01:47:49
@Jenni...I like! :D I hope you continue it soon. :)

@ Elni...OMB! That's so sad... Very expressive. I liked it. :)

10-14-2007, 20:05:24
I am glad u liked it dear Escape :hug2: . I had a very strange inspiration that day. I was working and suddenly some of those lines jump in to my head. I try something happier next time ;)

11-16-2007, 09:17:35
There is a room, cold and damp, nearly all forgotten
where harsh words once were very cruelly spoken
Within this place the dirty floor is mouldy oaken
and here lies the pieces of what had then been woken
ripped apart thrown around until roughly crushed and broken
So find them all
around the hall
shreds of what once had been
but never will it stand again proudly as a token
or ever again be seen

11-16-2007, 09:21:08
That is an absolutely beautiful poem, my dear mother. :) So well written and touching. You've got such an amazing talent. :) :hug2::hug2::kittyhugs:

11-16-2007, 10:45:39
It's sad and dark, but very beautiful! Proof that you can write english poems after all ;) :hug2:

11-16-2007, 23:50:48
they are small because I took them with my cell phone

11-17-2007, 00:59:59
They're beautiful, Mcakkay!! :o Are you planning on doing photography when you're older as a career? They're very pretty! :)

11-17-2007, 01:02:53
I would love to..but I doubt it...I don't know how I would go about it.

11-17-2007, 01:06:10
If you choose to go to college, you can take it as a minor, instead of a majot (that's how it works here in the states, anyway). And you could major in something else....Hmm....Or you could submit your art to newspapers for now. :D Just for fun. :D

11-17-2007, 01:16:23
It would be a really great thing to do. People always tell me I should but I feel you should be incredible at it and I don't know if Im as good as others so..Im thinking about massage Therapy or something like that...maybe even a Gene Doctor (learnt about it in Biology - sounds really interesing) ... truthfully I don't really know...everyones talking about what they want to do and Im just like.. uhhhhhhhh..........

11-17-2007, 02:00:17
LOL....Don't feel bad. I know LOTS of people who don't know still, and they're much older than you. ;) And you know, you do have talent, I think. And you can always practice it more, and also take classes on it, to learn more about it. :)

11-17-2007, 03:15:38
thanks!! I took a photography class last year and Loved it...I'd post picture but they are of other people and I dont want to put their face on the internet. I think i need a new camera if I want to start taking better picture...digital isn't the best. So I guess i'll start saving up the $!

11-17-2007, 06:32:14
Very beautiful Lilli

11-21-2007, 21:45:41
I will no longer be posting on this thread. I fear someone might hravest my work as their own. I'm sorry.

11-21-2007, 21:48:15
JCATZ,,,your not weird,,,,,i feel that too,,,depression happens to everyone and you have the best way to finish it,,,and your poems are awesome,,,

its not depression. i dont feel hurt. i feel... negative, and understanding of how the world really is.

11-21-2007, 21:52:03
I will no longer be posting on this thread. I fear someone might hravest my work as their own. I'm sorry.

I looooooove reading your poems. But I understand sis. :hug2:

11-21-2007, 22:00:20
i missed you so! it seems like when ever im on, you are not, and when you are on, im not, and when we both are on, we never see each other! HUGZ!

12-02-2007, 01:27:00
Ok... Some of you have been asking to hear me sing, so I finally recorded something :wink:
I recorded it straight to my PC through a really bad mic, so there is something wrong around 0:35 seconds, and this is also the first time ever I play this song, so have patience! Thanks :D

Click here to listen to Jeg-synger-Katie-Melua (http://media.putfile.com/Jeg-synger-Katie-Melua)

EDIT: I've also been having breathing problems all day, so I'm not at my best on the higher and lower notes ;)

12-02-2007, 08:11:28
Even recorded with a bad mic, you having breathing problems and my dodgy speakers, it sounds wonderful! :D You have a beautiful voice!
And thanks for finally sharing it ;) :hug2:

12-02-2007, 08:18:45
I can't make it play. :( :'( I wanted to hear it!!!! :(

12-02-2007, 08:20:51
@Escape: I couldn't play it from the website either, so I downloaded it with RealPlayer. Maybe that will work for you too?

12-02-2007, 10:38:36
Can't find a way to download it. :wht: :(

12-02-2007, 14:27:11
Thanks, Iva :hug2:

@Scapie: Wait, I'll see if I have another link that might work better :wink:

Try this one: http://media.putfile.com/Jeg-synger-Katie-Melua

12-02-2007, 17:23:15
It's the same link, dear, and I can't hear you either. :'(

12-02-2007, 17:55:36
:( Doesn't work for me either

12-02-2007, 18:18:10
:( Too bad...

12-03-2007, 00:08:25
Yeah..:'( Thanks for trying, my dear. :) :hug2: I have a feeling you sound wonderful. :)

12-03-2007, 01:27:41
Well, I use firefox and I can get the sound without too much problem butaaa... on very high volume. When I tried IE it was not possible ta get the file to load.... :S

That was very very well sung, dear. You have a beautiful voice :hug2:

12-03-2007, 08:05:00
I'll try downloading and installing firefox on this computer when I have more time. Thanks for letting me know. :)

12-03-2007, 17:16:29
That was very very well sung, dear. You have a beautiful voice :hug2:

Daaww, dat's so shweet :shy:

12-06-2007, 16:28:32
Iva challanged me to find a picture of her as a cloud in the photo contest so I might have kinda sorta "found" one :P

http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/91b4e0031c.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)

12-06-2007, 16:32:18
I did no such thing :mhmh: :P
But I love it, escpecially the Dumb Dutch Donkey ears :P Thank you! :hug2:

06-14-2008, 00:42:36
It's real' pwetty, Lillz :D

These are the lyrics to my second newest song, it's called Black Dreams:

Bells are ringing
Sounds from way up high
Earth is singing
It's own lullaby

Dark clouds rising
Shrouding all the light
It's not worth the fight

Where did all this come from
When will all this end
Why did all this happen
Will light soon ascend

Begging, pleading
Stop for heaven's sake!
Hardly breathing
Glad I'm not awake

06-28-2008, 20:51:54
Sorry for double posting, all you mods :wink:

Well, I promised a few members that I'd tell them if I ever uploaded my music on the internet, and now I have, so I thought I'd...tell you guys! :D

The link is http://www.myspace.com/ragnek

I have to warn you that I had a cold the day I recorded, so it's a bit rough :wink:
Both lyrics and melody of all songs are my own :)

Enjoy :D

06-28-2008, 22:01:59
:o Very nice, Simply! I especially enjoyed Black Dreams. I'm a sucker for good acapella stuff. let me know if you release and album at any point... I'd buy it. ;)

Eternal Becky
06-28-2008, 22:11:10
Wow :o Amazing. I don't have words :o Your voice is just awesome :D

06-28-2008, 22:22:48
Thanks the both of you :hug2: It means alot!

@Crimson: I usually don't say this about things I make myself, but I love that song. I wrote that after over a year of writers block, and I'm really happy with it! :D

06-29-2008, 00:36:25
Just Listened to your songs Crazy and they sounded wonderful!!! Hope to hear more!!:)

06-29-2008, 01:13:18
I'm "Simply" amazed!!!! :o Stunned. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL music and voice! :o Are you playing the guitar, too? :o GREAT JOB! :appl::appl::appl:

06-29-2008, 01:15:13
I am :shy:

Thanks, the both of you :hug2:

06-29-2008, 11:32:44
@ SimplyCrazy...Man that was brilliant.
I am really jealous.
Although, I wish I could hear the song at a volume greater than a mumble.
Sorry that is all I can hear,but it sounds great.

06-29-2008, 16:59:11
You're jealous of a girl's voice? :P
Just kidding, thanks alot :hug2:

Aw, that's too bad. I think they're better when you have enough volume... :wink:

06-30-2008, 04:10:24
100/5 ;)

07-03-2008, 19:04:46
Couldn't you do anything about it?
I kept my volume at max.
And yeah,I don't mind being jealous of a girls voice.
Because I really suck.

07-03-2008, 19:05:52
In singing,that is.

07-03-2008, 20:23:52
You should be able to turn up the volume on the player-thing aswell :wink:
It's weird you're having trouble with it, cos everyone else I've talked to could hear it perfectly fine :?:S

07-03-2008, 20:30:06
Simply you realy have a great voice :D I am really amazed with your voice. Honestly consider doing it as your professional job

07-03-2008, 20:32:32
I am :) There's nothing else I wanna do! I'm going to the local music high school, starting this fall, and after that I'm concidering the Paul McCartney school in Liverpool :wink: (The Liverpool Institute for Performing Arts - LIPA)
Music is my life, and I intend to keep it that way :wink:

07-03-2008, 20:37:06
Ow NOOOOO, you come to Liverpool????? I am at Liverpool for 8 years now, and when you come I won't be here :'(

I wish you for the very best, just don't forget us when you are rich and famous :D

07-03-2008, 20:38:32
Thaz too bad :'(

I won't forget you...uhm...Elly, was it :P

07-03-2008, 20:40:31
Amazing simply. Just absolutely amazing.
You have to give us all front row seats here at GH when your big time and we come to see you.
I've been told I'm good at signing but, wow. That was phenomanal.

07-03-2008, 20:40:58
That is what I am called in UK. It is hard to pronounce Elisavet or Elsa. But I prefer Elly (or Ellie the spelling defers from person to person, it can also be written as Elli, your choice :P )

07-03-2008, 20:43:51
Thanks alot, Sum :D Hey, I'm blushing here :shy: It wasn't that good :P

@Eln: Ahaaa. Tell you what; the English speaking have a hard time pronouncing any name that isn't english :wink: I don't think Elisavet sounds hard, but I might be imagining it wrong :wink: And ofcourse I won't forget you guys :hug2:

07-03-2008, 20:44:40
If you need a drummer I'm available.

07-03-2008, 20:50:33
I'll def call if I need one :wink:

07-21-2008, 18:08:24
I made this myself.Neither images were copyrighted...so.... The Sasuke image was a screenshot from one of the episodes,but it had enough quality to be used like this.After cuting the background I switched it with a wolf wallpaper I found a while ago. I had to restrain the hight of the image as not to draw Sasuke`s torso.Also had to redden the Sharingan more,because it looked orange. The wolf in the background represents him,if you`ve watched the anime Naruto,you`ll know what I mean...


Well,what do you guys think?

07-21-2008, 18:25:35
It's amazing.

07-21-2008, 18:44:56
Thanks ^^ My first try...It`s not the great,but i guess it could be worse ;]

07-21-2008, 20:08:41
Great job, Nef. :appl: Looks good. :)

07-22-2008, 21:14:45
Very good job Nef :D Me likes it :)

07-22-2008, 21:34:24
Thanks elni...i was supposed to start my work on a Naruto project,but i`ll have to do it tomorrow....oh well ^^

07-22-2008, 22:10:44
Wow, it's great :D :appl:

2 Tails
10-18-2008, 20:05:55
Hi this i wrote1

There are many different types of Yoshi. Their type is related to their color. Some Yoshies are even granted special abilities.

Green Yoshies are the most common and well known Yoshi. They don't have any unique abilities or characteristics. Their favorite fruit are watermelons.
Red Yoshies are the Yoshies of Fire. Most live in or around active vocanoes. Most have short tempersThey have the ability to spit fireballs. Their favorite fruit are apples.
Yellow Yoshies don't have a specific habitat, but will usually live in warm climates. Not hot, but warm enough. Yellow Yoshies are very powerful, and can start earthquakes by stomping their feet. Their favorite fruit are bananas.
Light Blue Yoshies live in cold environments, but not ones that are cold enough for snow. Many Light Blue Yoshies have wings, but not all. These Yoshies don't have a favorite fruit.
Dark Blue Yoshies live by large bodies of water, and sometimes by rivers. They can stay underwater for long periods of time, and are fast swimmers. These Yoshies don't have a favorite fruit.
Pink Yoshies are usually found near Yellow Yoshies in a warm environment. They love peaches. These Yoshies don't have any special abilities.
White Yoshies live in cold temperatures, such as high mountains. They don't have a favorite fruit, and since they live in cold environments, they usually don't eat fruit (they do still enjoy it.) When they throw eggs (normally in self defense) their eggs give off a slight explosion to give them an extra bit of power. These Yoshies are very rare.
Black Yoshies live in extremely hot environments. They don't have a favorite fruit, since fruit in the places they live are scarce. Black Yoshies have the same power that White Yoshies have.
Brown Yoshies don't have any special abilities. They don't have a favorite fruit, or a specific environment they live in. Browns are the second most common Yoshi around.

When hatching, the temperature of the surrounding air effects what the egg will hatch into. For certian colors, such as Dark Blue, the surroundings themselves effect the color. If you surround an egg with any specific natural environment, then that will speed the hatching process.

Here are the Yoshi colors and what to do to get them:

Green- Mild temperature. Forest or grassy environment.
Red- Very hot temperature. Volcano environment (if no volcanoes are handy, a kitchen oven at 500 degrees will work too.)
Yellow- Warm temperature. Beach envirionment.
Light Blue- Very cold temperature.
Dark Blue- Very cold temperature. Body of water required (if no lakes/oceans/rivers/etc are availible, fill a bathtub with cold water.)
Pink- Warm temperature.
White- Freezing temperature. Snow environment.
Black- Extremely hot temperature. Volcanic environment.
Brown- Any temperature. Any environment.
If an egg requirement is not met, it will either hatch into a Brown Yoshi or it will hatch into whatever requirement it was closest to.
An egg should be kept in a large nest. After an egg hatches, the Yoshi will stay in the nest for three days. They should be fed fruit that has been mushed in a bowl. After five days, they will be able to eat whole fruit.

Yoshies will eat lots of things, but they generally eat fruit. All Yoshies love Melon, but most have a unique favorite that corresponds with their color.
Some Yoshies don't have access to fruits, so they are forced to eat animals smaller than themselves. Even so, these Yoshies still enjoy fruit when they can eat it.

Yoshies need to keep healthy to have happy, long lives. Most Yoshies make sure they keep healthy themselves, but others need help staying fit.
Yoshies need a substantial amount of physical activity each day. The most common form of exercise is running. Yoshi can walk for miles, and can run quite far.

Yoshies also need at least two balenced meals each day: breakfast and dinner. A balenced meal includes at least two fruits and half a gallon of water. Three meals a day should be avoided, since this will lead of obesity.

To fight diseases, they should get a recommended shot from a veterinarian. There aren't many vaccines out, but it's recommended that Yoshies have all vaccines released.

Yoshies aren't born knowing how to do everything, so they must be trained. Parents will generally do most of the training.

On the fifth day of a Yoshi's life, it will start wandering outside of the nest. It will first crawl, so it needs to be taught to walk. Hold it upright by the arms and pull it forward, and it will take a step to keep balenced. Practice this for a few days, and the hatchling will eventually learn to take steps by itself.

Young Yoshies should wear diapers for the first few days. Most hatchlings will dislike diapers, and refuse to wear them. Until they can learn where they should and shouldn't go, they should wear diapers even if they don't want to. Discipline a Yoshi if it removes the diaper without being told to. It shouldn't take more than four to five days.

Although Yoshies are quite capable of talking, some will never learn. Teaching a Yoshi to speak will greatly increase its intelligence, and make it much easier to understand what it wants. Unlike most things you can train a Yoshi to do, speaking can take years to learn. It is important to start as soon as the hatchling can leave the nest.

Long isn`t?;D

12-28-2008, 20:36:26
I was thinking for a while about creating a thread for Paint.NET tutorials. Buuuut, I dunno if there would be any interest in such a thread so instead I'd like to show some pictures completely made from scratch by only using the features available on Pain.Net. What may also be important to know is that I am not good at drawing so I am thankful there is a free tool that enables me to make pictures like these ;)

Here is an example of a picture with a watermark.
http://e.imagehost.org/0472/alien_watermark.png and here is the same picture but with a different brightness and other watermarkhttp://e.imagehost.org/0494/alien_watermark2.png
If you would like to show off your work but would like in some way to protect them then this is easily done in Paint.Net :)

OH!....and here is
to the posted images http://e.imagehost.org/0602/alien_watermark3.png :P:P:P

12-29-2008, 00:01:44
Lilli - :o! Those are amazing :D :appl:

You should make a thread so I can learn :haha: so far I can only do cut outs and pastes with it :P

(Would also like to learn how to protect them :D)

:rofl-smilie: At reaction

12-29-2008, 00:37:44
Thank you :$
You'd be amazed how far you can get with cutouts :P
Well, if there is an expressed interest from members I might just do that ;)

12-29-2008, 00:40:45
:P I believe it :haha:
Yay! :D

I think I got the protection thing down after some exploration of the program :P

12-29-2008, 00:42:32
GREAT WORK, my dear nephew :D Now... explore layers ;)

12-29-2008, 04:53:54

12-29-2008, 15:35:55
I see sumbunny has discovered the Paint.NET plugins :D YAY! Well done, Funja :appl:

12-31-2008, 06:31:43
i did no i didnt i used what was there when i downloaded and there isnt a watermark in the new version is ther a pugin for it
and i would love for this to be a thread it is so fun to do

12-31-2008, 16:24:23
Awww.... well, that is good to hear :)
There is a plugin for marking pics, but you could just as easily make the same text with the text tool. However, if you want to blend text with a picture then it's better with a tutorial because it requires knowledge about layers. ;) The first example shows a quick uhm and maybe not as elegant a way :$ to do just that. If you blend a text with a picture it's harder to remake your picture ;)

12-31-2008, 19:00:04
Lilli - Where do you see this Watermark thing too :? I don't see it anywhere :S

:S What else can you do with layers other than protect an image like I attempted:haha: :hmm:

12-31-2008, 19:13:07
lol well tehre isnt a watermark on the new version of paint.net but there is a pugin i think
:? she gave me a weird answer

Lilli so are we going to make this a thread or not

12-31-2008, 19:26:17
Lilli - Where do you see this Watermark thing too :? I don't see it anywhere :S

:S What else can you do with layers other than protect an image like I attempted:haha: :hmm:
Ahem... it seems I will have to create this new thread so I can explain the wonders of layers :P

If you go to "Help" on the top tool bar there is an option in the drop down menu to go to "Plugins". If you click it you will end up HERE (http://paintdotnet.forumer.com/viewforum.php?f=16) There are many plugins to choose from but all may not suit your needs ;)

lol well tehre isnt a watermark on the new version of paint.net but there is a pugin i think
:? she gave me a weird answer

Lilli so are we going to make this a thread or not
Well... I suppose I should. I'll make it in "Artwork and sounds in games" subforum because the purpose is to learn some features of Paint.NET to help make game graphics. However, the tips can be used for any ideas of picture creating ;) I'll need some moderation input though so I don't bungle up the idea :P

12-31-2008, 19:32:27
I just discovered the wonders of layers! :o! They are amazing! :D

Ah okay thanks! :D

12-31-2008, 19:33:32
There is already a Paint.net Help thread where you can ask for help, and add tutorials:

12-31-2008, 19:35:58
I know about this thread but it is not clear that it is about Pain.NET tuturials, just help in general. Anyway, I won't create the thread then. Thank you for the answer Mistery :)

12-31-2008, 19:37:18
I can change the thread title a bit, I think 1 thread for Paint.net is enough :)

12-31-2008, 19:37:57
I agree. Thanx again :D

01-15-2009, 16:08:23

Courage is a very important virtue. It is the
ability to stay loyal even in the hardest situation.
Also, to stand up for what you believe in, no matter what.
To help others even when you don't think you can go on.
Now that is courage!
Styaing loyal is a major part of courage. From
staying loyal to your country, to staying loyal to your
friends. Loyalty is a major reason we are even a country.
For without loyalty we can not trust or be trusted.
To stand up for what you believe in is the reason
for so many fights. But, wihtout defending what you believe
in, do you really believe? This is a good reason to accept
what others believe in. Even if you dont believe the same
way as them.
Helping others when they are in need is
what makes us human. You can just look the other
way, but you know it isn't right.Helping sometimes puts
you in danger, bout it is worth it. Knowing you helped
others with something they needed just makes you feel good.
As Charles Dubois said,"To be able to at any moment
to sacrifice what we are for what we could become," is courage.
These are the main reasons that all humans should havethis virtue.
Now, become and stay couragous.

01-15-2009, 19:31:54
A very wonderful essay, Funja!!! :appl::appl: Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us!!! Well said. :) :hug2:

01-15-2009, 19:44:18
A very good insight into life :) It sounds like a really great president speeech :)

01-15-2009, 19:46:49
well uhh thats weird lol since im still in middle school:P

01-15-2009, 19:48:28
Yeah i know :) (Umm is middle school... Well what is middle school?) Is it ages 11-16?

01-15-2009, 19:51:11
no 11-14

01-15-2009, 19:53:53
Ahhh, So ur 14? or 13? Very good :) Especially for ur age :)