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    Some pivot comics will be made. 50 to be correct. though i need to know what will happen and what the name will be. so i made one with my idea but now i need your ideas for the next comic. and you can reply on how good the comic is or how it could be improved. i can edit it.

    What to do:
    Look at my comic i made and think of what you want it to be and what the name of it you want it to be.
    Give me a idea and it will be on the polls list down below in this post.
    After 5 ideas are in, vote for which one.
    After 3 days, the votes over and whatever wins ill make and put here as the comic.

    This is Comic 1: Bazooka Jam

    Any Differences you want me to do on it ill do just post on what you want fixed.

    Ok guys give me your ideas now!

    Polls:
    Please wait for comic...

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    Always A Place For Great Ideas!

    READ THIS!: If theres no new idea in a week then the polls will start anyway. no new characters. only the 4 characters (Victom and Dumbass, SkateShooter and Lil Robo) can be in the comics. Ideas must have only 1 or 2 characters. cannot go over this limit of characters.
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    Hey Neww999!!

    I think your animation is smooth and runs nicely. You did a good job on it. (I'm not a fan of violence, however, so that's why I haven't replied to your thread until now. ) But I do think you did a good job of creating it. You want to know what happens next, huh? What about something where the VICTOM gets to have something good now that the bad guy isn't around. Maybe have him driving a cool car or something.

    Btw, I really like how at the end the VICTOM holds up that part of the speech box at the end. That was a cool idea, and it really works.

    As for the title... Maybe something about how the underdog wins. But, it's late here, and I'm not too sure what a good title might be.

    Anyway, I hope I was able to give you some useful feedback.

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    Ill call it "Victoms Escape". that ideas in. thats for the feedback too. also that ceiling is a speech box. and hes name isnt Victim its Victom its a name for him. now all i need is 4 more ideas.
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    Oh, oopsy!! Told you its late. I'm gonna edit my post so I use his proper name and call it the speech box instead of ceiling. .

    I hope others offer you some more feedback soon.

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    yep or some more ideas for the polls. just need 4 more ideas and the polls start. well i cant have the real polls i dont think i can get rid of the polls then and make a new polls here for more ideas so my first post here will have polls and as a little good thing at the end where i say about the characters ill put above "Thanx to *Winners Name* for idea" and Winners Name will be replaced with the winners name of the polls idea.
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    Sounds like a great idea. I hope more people come and visit this thread for ya soon.

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    For guys who dont want to put their ideas here cause its stupid i dont care. just put in your idea stupid or not. any idea.
    Edit: hows the picture and text guys?
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    I thought that it flowed very well, and it had certain aspects of creativity incorporated into it.
    I think a way to continue it would be for it to actually be a secret compound, and VICTOM makes his escape.

    Hope I was any help.
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    Ok jones. ill accept it in the polls unless i have the title. dont know what its called without a title.

    How bout call it "Escaper"? that will do. Its in.

    Edit: hey i made one:
    Skateshooter is skating when he hits the SB (Skate Brakers) leader and they chase him all the way and at the end we see a guy who jumps with hes fist on the board. then it frezzes and ends. Skateshooter does not have his desert eagle in this because its the start of the hole story.

    Its called "The Beginning Of Skateshooter".

    My idea is added and i can add my ideas in too.

    Edit: well now im putting in a new rule. and its a good one. its been 3 days since theres no new ideas.
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    well its been long (too long) and nobody has vote so i made my own way of a comic. New Style! enjoy! This is Comic 2: Hanging On.
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    Please post some ideas and some voting. i like that really much.

    Please can someone rename this thread "Comics Made By New1000 In Pivot" cause im not New999 anymore.
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