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    Default Story Reviews (for stories in the creativity subforum)

    This thread has been created after the model of the Story Reviews thread in the GamersHood Planet Subforum.

    Here you can give feedback to stories that are written by members that have nothing to do with our GamersHood characters.

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    Kidnapped

    It's a good start. However, I didn't think it was flowing the way it should and it felt like you were repeating yourself. Still I'm exited to see what you'll make of this


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    Yes. Remember, it's only a start. As I make more the story should/will flow into a nice story.

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    that sounds really good man! i cant wait untill the other chapters come out!!!! good job !
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    Thanks.
    If you want you can help. If you want to help pm me and we can set up some details.

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    Just read Elni's stories Great! I really like mythology, so the first one was perfect for me, and I'm also really exited do find out how GH really was made! ^^
    Rock on, Chicken!


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    Thank you Simple I hope you like the other part as well. I finish it probably today or tomorrow

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    Looking forward to it!


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    Default How GH Planet was created

    Ooh! I wanna know what happens at 7 pm!? Well done dear Elni! Well done. Looking forward to more.

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    Yay new story for me.
    wheeeeeeeeeeeee.

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