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    title found.

    my book will be called The Blood Parade.

    You can find the chapters here:
    http://thebloodparade.webs.com/index.htm

    Please note, that the contents are not suitable for children.

    as for my second book, i have not decided.
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    Well, it would help to make suggestions if we knew what the book is about.

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    Genre?
    Subject of the book?
    Main characters?
    Maybe some keywords from the book's plot?

    I understand you not wanting to give away the details of the book, but we need some info to help you get good ideas, lol.
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    Genre: Romance
    the main characters are Rosemary White and Curtis...i don't have a last name for him yet...
    basically, it's about a girl who moves to Bakersfield, CA from Florida in january with her parents. she has to start her senior year late, but she can still graduate. she walks in and sees a strange guy. his eyes are red. (a little weird, but it makes sense later.) they begin talking and soon become good friends. she finds out he's a vampire and fate had put them together, but he will die if she is not a vampire by the end of the year.

    needs a little work, but it's coming out great. all i need is a title and the rest of the book. i'm on chapter 17...i think...i'm not sure, but it's pretty far along. soo. much help would be appreciated. sorry i didn't put it in the first message!
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    Haha, does she go to north next year? Then she'll be in the same class as me... but there are no vamp's at north,


    Hmmm... is there an aspect of comedy or drama in it?
    Or, is it written in 1st person of Rose, or 3rd person?
    And, if 3rd person: omniscient, limited, or limited/objective?
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    first person. it's sort of mixed comedy drama and romance. at first i wanted to call it Roses are Red, but i dunno.

    WAIT, do you live in Bako?
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    Question what?

    Quote Originally Posted by LovelyUndeadVam View Post
    Arghh. i'm writing a book and i CAN'T THINK OF A TITLE!!

    this really bugs me. no matter how much i try, i just can't get one in my head. help would be MUCH MUCH appreciated in this AND i would include you in my special thanks. so please, help me out.
    what type of book is it?
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    Here was a description:

    Quote Originally Posted by LovelyUndeadVam View Post
    Genre: Romance
    the main characters are Rosemary White and Curtis...i don't have a last name for him yet...
    basically, it's about a girl who moves to Bakersfield, CA from Florida in january with her parents. she has to start her senior year late, but she can still graduate. she walks in and sees a strange guy. his eyes are red. (a little weird, but it makes sense later.) they begin talking and soon become good friends. she finds out he's a vampire and fate had put them together, but he will die if she is not a vampire by the end of the year.

    needs a little work, but it's coming out great. all i need is a title and the rest of the book. i'm on chapter 17...i think...i'm not sure, but it's pretty far along. soo. much help would be appreciated. sorry i didn't put it in the first message!

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    No, I just go to north high in bako (actually the dale, ) because I live in vermont! (sarcasm, duhh)

    Hmmm... I was gonna say... Love Bites, but it's too cliche, and it's already been used for a book,

    Hmmm...
    If she lets herself become a vamp, then it could possibly be
    "The biggest sacrifice of my teenage life!"
    buuut....

    Hmmm...
    I'll think of something better, lol.

    (^^^ PS, you don't have to tell me as to give away the ending, lol^^^)





    And, @fufeline:
    Look 3 posts above yours.
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    LovelyUndeadVam, I really like the plot of the story. Because I've always liked vampire stories, if it's either in a book or movie.
    I was thinking the title could be The Rose's Fate. Or possiblly, The Fate Of The Rose. Something along those lines anyway, because of the main character's name, Rosemary and how she has to meet this fate to help Curtis by the end of the year.
    It's just an idea...if it's bad, it's bad. I don't really mind, I'm not an expert in these kind of things anyway!
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