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    Stop! Short Circuit!

    Not another zombie book...

    Yes, another zombie book!
    This one is different! It follows the stories of four different characters (instead of the usual 1 (or 1 group)) has almost no major sections including the military (which has been done and overdone in just about EVERY OTHER BOOK) and,
    drumroll please...

    It ACTUALLY has a logical explaination of zombies, where they come from, how they work, and how they came into existance!

    So, if you are ready to start a whole new, better zombie experience:
    CLICK HERE!


    WARNING: This book might not be suitable for young children! Read at your own risk! Please do not read if you do not approve of horror!



    Please leave feedback of any kind. Whether it be good or bad, it all helps me!

    Those who HAVE left feedback:
    EscapeGirl | HeartoftheDark | someguy | funja | LovelyUndeadVam | Clank | ShiningStar | 1momomo124

    Thank you for the support!
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    YAY! Gonna go read.

    First off...it's an interesting read! I like that you are developing the characters a bit. I really


    Not my usual type of story to read, due to violence, but it's an entertaining story, and I'm curious where you'll go with it!

    Anyway, I thought I'd point out a couple minor things in case you missed them.

    From Sherell's story, toward the end of the chapter:
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    From William's story, 1st main paragraph:
    1.


    2. (From 2nd main paragraph)

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    Glad you're liking it Escape!

    Well, sorry I


    Thanks for the typos! I fixed them. If you notice any more, don't hesitate to correct me
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    Justeazy - Are there only four short stories?

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    There are going to be more.
    He's typing up chapters to each of the characters, making a distinct story for each.

    I think it's brilliant.

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    Well... kinda yes and no to both of those...

    There are 4 distinct, short stories, for each of the main characters. However, they will get longer (as that is not the final versions up now)
    However, they all revolve around the same concept, and their stories converge into one after a little while. Some of them meet up, they can have conflict with eachother, and in one way or another, they will all influence one another by the time the book is over.


    PS, thx for the "brilliant" someguy



    UPDATE EDIT: I got another part up! Jack Borring's first part of the story!
    Also, added a little into the section of the "Zombie History" stuff.

    STILL need a last name for Julia.
    It needs to be something old/regal sounding, like she is full of pride... hmm
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    I decided to link my story somewhere to.
    But no feedback yet. D:

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    Okay, I've got the 4th part (first "Julia" chapter) done and ready for posting. I'm just waiting for a last name before I post it.
    STILL need a last name for Julia
    It needs to be something old/regal sounding, like she is full of pride... hmm

    As soon as I get that last name, I'll edit it in, then post it!

    For those of you who have read Jack Borring's first part:
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    that annoyed me so much and those are all the states around me

    ahhhhhhhhhhhh oh wait just my dog


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    Sorry about that funja. The "south east" was just where I decided to set this SMALL town, lol.
    Don't worry, it's fiction tho (for now )

    EDIT: I have posted the first part of Julia's story up. I let it cut off at the first point where her last name is mentioned.
    Hopefully, this will influence those who liked her part to think up a last name!
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