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"Neither would I, Mr. Harris" she stated, trying not to let the fear break through the sense of pride, now even more evident in her voice. Then, whispering to herlsef "No, I would not have that..." letting the fear show through, but still not completely, not even to herself.
@Funja: No, not sarcasm. An actual question, because when I fixed it, I wondered if you meant how I fixed it, or to make it another title (like the dark red that says "her story" at the top of the page) just making sure,
@Undead: true, but I didn't need to double (or quadruple) post, and it hadn't been anyone else posting yet,
No. I chose to do it this way, because then I don't have to worry about the "SPONSORS" things getting in the way.
Would you like it a different color tho? I could make it so
@Funja: Sure, you can do that, but no saving the book itself,
Hmmm... I'll just leave them how they are... but you can find it easily by hitting "F3" on your keyboard, and just typing the number, as I only use words (like "two") in my story, instead of numbers (like "2") that are the section headers.
Julia looked at Mr. Harris, dismay platered all over her face.
(Should be plastered.
Now....your book has me very intrigued. I want to know what the "facility" is all about, and I have to admit, I haven't yet found the parts that tie in together. But I assume that
Sharrell has met up with Stephenson at that intersection, but I'm not sure.
So very good. Keep up the writing, and let me know when you post more! *rushes off to read Geordiboy's story*
Really love the story, i really like the way you have sortta developed each character and recognised them as individuals, it reminds me a bit like the tv program 'heroes'
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do, Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new, These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York
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