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hmmm. i don't know. i think that maybe the little girl is going to have some type of story to tell the woman.
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OOOOO chills with the last word -phantoms- ok that was great 6 plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2~28~10 <3Comment
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Great story Geordiboy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I have a feeling he's gonna hear from the girl what happened...who they are....And I'm anxious to know. 
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Heres chapter 6
“What? What did you say”.
“Phantoms. Phantoms. Phantoms”, the girl s******ed.
I turned and looked into the mirror, and there was a man staring at me in the reflection.
“Oh my god, what is that?”, I turned and looked at the girl, “Who is he, whats he doing here”.
“He’s here, and he’s coming for you, he’s gonna get you”.
I tore the girl from the sofa and fled down the hallway into the dining room, I turned out the light, the shadows weren’t there in the lights.
“How did they get in the house!?”. I grabbed a golf club that was conveniently, sitting, in the corner.
“Its no use trying to run, you’ll make them angry, and if you make them angry, they will kill you”, the little girl muttered.
“Who is he?”
“He’s here”.
I felt my breath curdle up on my face. I felt him there. I closed my eyes. And when I opened them…
I was outside on the town, in the daylight, people were here, thousands of people protesting. There was a man on a podium. Everyone shouting “What about us? What about us?” It was then. I realised why I was alive and not dead like the rest of us. Because I was immune, because my blood was immune.
“It’s me your after isn’t it”, I whispered. “ You want my blood, you want a cure”.New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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Ooh! It's great, Geordieboy!
That was an unexpected twist!
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oooo. i liked that one. the little girl must have been locked up too long.
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It is supposed to be a him, but everyone thinks its a her and thanks Justeazy,
The reflection bit shall be revealedNew York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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There are only 10 chapters in the story so if anyone wants to request a longer 2nd book that would be greatNew York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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Do you really think we would NOT want a 2nd book!?!?!
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Thanks escape when the first story has finished let me know new ideas and i will get writingNew York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
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Heres chapter 7 of The Phantoms
The man was there, I knew he was, I couldn’t see him but I felt his presence, He wanted my blood, he wanted a cure.
“You know don’t you”, the girl said.
“Yeah, I am the cure”.
“Of course, he wants you, your going to die because he wants to live, he wants to rule, he going to get you and your going to die”.
“What is your name?”.
“It’s Ebony”, she answered.
Suddenly! Out of nowhere the boxes in the corner tumbled to the ground and the bangs on the windows started again, it was daylight and I forgot to lock the door.
“Oh no!”
The daylight poured in through the cracks in the walls and the bangs started, all day they would continue. They were out there and they wanted to be in.
I scurried to the door and pulled back the latch to seal it shut. I ran in the living room and turned off all the lights, I was in complete darkness. The shudders ran up my spine and severed each nerve as they fled up and down it. I was horrified. I clambered my way down the hallway back to the girl, she had answers.
Out of nowhere the radio turned on and at full volume this song played.
“The Phantoms will get you, there going to get you, they’re gonna get you in the night, they’re gonna kill you, they’re gonna kill you and your going to die”, the radios voice boomed into the whole house.
I stood still. I froze. I closed my eyes. My heart and my pulse accelerated at a tremendous speed. The girl was in sight and she was smilingNew York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
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woooo. creepy. that little girl is giving me goosebumps!!
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