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    Cool I need a good story title!!

    Ok, so I'm writing this kinda, crime/thriller/mystery type story. But no matter how hard I think I can't think of a good title for it. Anyone got any good suggestions?

    Here's a little bit about the plot and characters:

    Main character: Girl. 14 years old, her names Misty Gromwell

    Plot: Early in the morning the phone rings, Misty answers it. A detective tells her he needs to speak with her urgently, but won't tell her why. A mysterious man turns up in her street looking for something (he's not looking for Misty but he finds out later, she can help him find what he's looking for, but Misty doesn't know anything about what's going on.)

    So, yeah that's basically it. Anyone have any ideas?
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    Hmmm... that's little to go by... but...

    How about...
    The unknown mystery???
    My role in fate's game???
    Crime of Misty Origins???
    A Misty Mystery???

    Wait... does "Girl 14" mean she is 14 or something else?
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    it means she's 14

    i like the 3rd one: The Crime of Misty Origins, but it isn't quite wat im looking for.

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    Hmmm... well, I don't know the story, so that's the best I can come up with... for now...
    I'll think on it and maybe post some more later...
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    Well i thought of the title for LovelyUndeadVams book so here are my suggestions.

    -All Clued Up
    -A mistery
    -A misty Call
    -Clues bite
    -Detective misty
    -The calls, the clues and me, misty tromwell

    But if you wrote the first chapter i will think of much better ones
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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    it could always be somthing simple like Misty Gromwell: A Tale Of Murder
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    Ummm... who are you saying hello to e7?

    New ideas:
    How about:
    Crime in the Misty city???
    Misty Gromwell: Teenage Detective???
    See You Through the Mist???
    The Misterous call???
    Mistified by this Mistery/Mystery???
    Mistifying circumstances???

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    Default Chapter One

    here's the first chapter tell me wat u think

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    'Hello?' Misty whispered hoarsly into the phone.
    'Is this Misty Gromwell?' the voice answered.
    'Yeah' Misty replied confused. She couldn't understand why the hell someone would be calling her this early in the morning. I mean it was 3:30 for goodness sakes! 'What do you want?' she replied hotly.
    'I was wondering if I could talk with you for a while, in private.'
    Ok, Misty thought, is this guy some sort of stalker or muderer? For the voice on the phone was male. 'Who are you?'
    'My name is Detective Sam Murchison from North Shore Police Station.' he answered.
    'Oh, well ummm what do you want, I mean I haven't done anything or seen anyone doing a crime.' Misty said, her voice starting to shake.
    'No, I'm not calling because of that, sweetheart. I'm calling you to say that I would really appreciate it if we could speak very soon. I will of course speak with your parents first. May I speak with them now, please?'
    'But it's 3:30am! Can't you wait until the sun is, like, actually up?' Misty whined.
    'I'm afraid it's quite an urgent matter to discuss. Please I must speak with your parents. Then I can speak with you.'
    'Fine' the girl mumbled. She slipped from the bed covers onto the cold floor not yet heated by the indoor heating. Grumbling and muttering to herself, Misty slowly crept along the floor, opened her door and stalked cat-like into the lounge area. Beyond that was the kitchen and then her parents room, which was connected to it.

    The door made that creaking sound like in all great horror movies. Fortunately there wasn't the usual scene with blood and bones all over the place awaiting the girl's eyes. Misty's parents were perfectly fine and snoring in their bed. Misty roughly shook her dad awake and when he grunted and opened his eyes she handed him the phone and sat on the end of the bed patiently waiting. 'What do you need her so urgently for that you can't wait until the morning?' her dad was whispering icily. 'Are you crazy? Why should I believe you!' her dad shouted down the receiver, making Misty jump. Her mum stirred breifly, but simply turned over and went back to sleep. 'Dad, Misty asked, what does the detective want?' Her dad just flapped his hand at her, a signal that said to wait and let him talk.
    'Look, he said, there's nothing you can-'
    He stopped probably listening to what the detective was saying and then turned his head towards Misty.
    'We have to be at the station in an hour, he told her, get ready, get something to eat and then we'll go.'

    END OF CHAPTER ONE
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    Hi yeah, you need to know that when someone new speaks you need to start a new line..

    But Yeah it was good, very intriguing, and exciting, think it will be a good read
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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