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    Ok this is where u can post poems,rate them,nd give advice for them.anyone can post,but please keep them rule safe If u feel offended by a comment about ur poem,plz report it or otherwise just ignore the comment Have fun.I'll start

    As I sit here wondering,this pain peirces my heart.As this pain grows my heart weakens.It's like I can't win for loseing.All these things swarm in my head and I can't seem to distract myself.All I think is when will this pain stop,when will this suffering end.Why do I fught when I don't want to.Why do I shut them out?Why do I hate them?Why do they treat me like this,just as I trust them they give me another reason to hate them.Why do I get shoved aside and beaten down,like an animal in captivity.My heart aches every day,longing for forgiving love,and acceptance.Can I please stand up without being kicked down over and over?Forced off the edge.But no one cares.Trying to hold on,but now one see's how broken we are inside.No-one trys.As I see my life crumble before my eyes.I cry in pain and dispare.I just don't get heard.I lye here in scilence,as I slowly fade away.


    plz note:"I was going through a ruff time,so plz don't be too hard on me "
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    wow. that was REALLY good, emo. reminds me of what i like to write about in my poems.
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    Thnx alot,I was wondering what kind of feedback I would get,lol. Thnx again

    Well if u want post them here I would love to read them!!!!!!!!
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    ohh, i have one.

    The tears of blood flow heavily,
    and I can't breathe.
    Get off my chest,
    I'm not going to be who you want.
    I'll wear my dark clothes,
    just to get at you.
    I'll put on black make-up,
    just to see your sneer.
    Do you think you own me?
    FYI, I own my soul,
    not you.
    Get off my chest.
    Breathe.
    Breathe.
    My life is my own,
    I make it what I want,
    and you can't be there to run it,
    because I am my own person.
    A rebel.
    Don't like it?
    Get a life.
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    wow that is really good too.I like how u stick it to whoever that was written about
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    it was written to all the preppy people at my school that give me dirty looks. it's all because they think that i "cut myself".
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    WOW you guys those were really good

    @emo- I love how you sort of sum up life
    @luv- I love how dark and slick it is
    @both- Really, really gud

    Here is mine

    In fear i tremble, i shake and shake. In fear i feast on everything that i shake about. It beats like a siren in the devils fear. The fears are coming. The fears are roaming all around the streets. Coming to get me, upon blissed fears. The fears i shake about are all coming, they're coming, and i am running away.
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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    ! that's amazing geordie!
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    IS IT!? I have wrote loads better
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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    yes it is really good.U explain actions nd feelings very well I like it
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