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  • Here's one that I made up in my sleep.

    Entangled in the darkness
    Where no stricken human eye
    Could ever hope to find an escaping path
    Trapped in a never ending oblivion
    And yet peaceful state of mind
    GH Family (possibly the coolest )
    Brother: ~GH Dog~
    Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
    (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
    Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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    • Originally posted by EscapeGirl View Post
      This is so sad. And worrisome. If you ever need to talk, please know I'm only a PM away, Party. Please, if you ever need to talk...just let me know. In the meantime, keep writing if it makes you feel better and helps get your feelings out. You're a nice guy, and I only hope to see happier poems to reflect a happier you in the future.



      Oh, Clank. The same goes for you, you know. If you need to vent, or get anything off your chest, you know how to reach me. I've been there, and I think there are many who know how you feel. I hope things look up for you. But that's a good poem. You're a cool guy. Keep that chin up.
      Ahh Thanks Escape!!!, Well things are already looking up, I had a bad week last week that ok, But thanks anyway Thanks

      Originally posted by LovelyUndeadVam View Post
      Here's one that I made up in my sleep.

      Entangled in the darkness
      Where no stricken human eye
      Could ever hope to find an escaping path
      Trapped in a never ending oblivion
      And yet peaceful state of mind

      Ahhh, Yeah its nice I like the simplicity
      New York!
      Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
      There's nothing you can’t do,

      Now you're in New York!
      These streets will make you feel brand new,
      These lights will inspire you,
      Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

      JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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      • Originally posted by LovelyUndeadVam View Post
        Here's one that I made up in my sleep.

        Entangled in the darkness
        Where no stricken human eye
        Could ever hope to find an escaping path
        Trapped in a never ending oblivion
        And yet peaceful state of mind
        I like it! Great job!

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        • Little Miss Muffet
          Sat on a tuffet
          Eating her curds & whey
          Along came a spider
          That decided to bite her
          And she died the very next day
          "If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous he will not bite you.This is the principal difference between a man and a dog"

          Mark Twain

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          • lolz XD
            i can never come up with words that sound good togther
            my brothers EMO GEROGE sounds better that my shoelace buter kid
            .Love.Explore.Laugh.Smile.Shop.Live.Rock.Flirt.Discorve.Accelerate.Express.Challange

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            • i never thought it would be this bad crossing the street isnt satisfying me. i thought about taking the long road. i get close. the path is there. but as i turn i remember her face. i cant. i turn back.just crossing the street. dont know where im going. but where ever it is, she'll be there every step of the way.
              ^END OF THAT ONE ^

              this knife has to be alive. controlling me with its edge. i pressit to the skin and let loose.everything goes away. its just me and the blood. dripping. pouring. i love it. yet i hate it. the way it stares at me. telling me something in a foreign language. the mixed feelings go away. and theres nothing but guilt. then i fall asleep. forgetting the nightmare. until i wake up and look down. the scars. stinging. laughing. i cover them up and act like nothing happened. but i kno it did.the scars wont let me forget. neither will the knife.and i kno ill be seeing them both again. reliving the night mare. the guilt. the pain.

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              • OMG PLZ TELL ME U DON'T HURT URSLEF???????? That's not gonna help party there are other ways out Like I always say if u need to talk that I'm here and not going anywhere
                2~28~10 <3

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                • ive just been going thru some rough times. not gonna go into that becaus thats really not something i openly share.

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                  • Ummmmm.....ok well I'm still always here lol.I got ur back if u need someone to vent to I know the world can be a dark and evil place,but there is good in it u just have to find it
                    2~28~10 <3

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                    • Thanx

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                      • The past changed me. opened my eyes so i could finally see. im awake now. Going back to what i was i just cant allow. i just stand up and take every punch in the face life throws. Now everything just flows. Im going crazy i know. Due to both friend and foe. Im not sure who i am, im just figuring this out. because until now, ive be blocked by a wall of doubt.

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                        • Very nice, Party. Tells a lot.

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                          • Thank you. thought id be the first to post in awhile haha.

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                            • Disease

                              My love for you
                              so strong
                              so sweet
                              Into your eyes I plunge.
                              And when I do,
                              Melting upon
                              looking at your beautiful eyes
                              beautiful hair
                              beautiful self
                              My bones crack
                              My heart thumps
                              My knees jiggle
                              My stomach rumbles
                              I can't keep still
                              Yet I'm unmoving
                              So lost
                              Are you a disease?
                              Terrible, but true from the heart.
                              Lost in you



                              Srry,for double posting,but I really need to create another poem.

                              Fall

                              The crisp cool air
                              and the trees turning bare
                              The leaves beneath
                              a walker's feet
                              The birds fly south
                              Like the geese and the lark
                              The day grows dark
                              The next day is bright.
                              Last edited by Adventure; 11-08-2009, 18:28:23. Reason: Just use the edit button. ;)

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                              • I started this poem so long ago then lost it, it all came back to me laying in bed a few nights ago and here is the final product.

                                Lost in Though


                                An idea for writing
                                Somewhere in my mind hiding

                                I tear open each door
                                Forgotten memories galore

                                Old dreams of mine
                                Once they were fine

                                No longer allowed
                                By the general crowd

                                They try to suppress
                                They call it progress

                                I fight and I fight
                                Of my goal I lose sight

                                No matter the cost
                                Do not get lost

                                Heed me I warn
                                You too they will mourn

                                I fought and I fought
                                Lost, lost in thought


                                Wow the original poem is on here here is the one i wrote back in 2006
                                same idea the above one is just more to my life now

                                Lost in thought
                                i never know what to do
                                always stuck looking to
                                i never found what i sought
                                no matter how much i fought and fought
                                i am always stuck right here lost in thought

                                Written by Funja
                                2006
                                Last edited by funja; 03-12-2011, 01:43:33.
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