I dont know guys, i think it isnt very good *false hope*
I dont know guys, i think it isnt very good *false hope*
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York
That's what I thought about mine so don't worry bout it
2~28~10 <3
OK thanks but i will post a better one
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York
yup me too,but l8er.I need to write some new ones too,cuz I only writ 2
2~28~10 <3
if i could access all mine i would have about...twenty to thirty.yeah i had a really rough time in life and i wrote to make it better. not saying that everything is okay now, but it's getting better.
GH Family (possibly the coolest
Brother: ~GH Dog~
Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
(highlight the text, there's someone hiding.)
Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank
ok here's number two.I don't like this one as much as I like the first.
As I sit here trapped in my head.
My thoughts race in my head.
I scream,but no-one hears.
I try,but no-one understands.
The pressure,the deppression.
The confusion overwelms my brain.
The anger.
The resistance.
The love.
The hate.
The sweet.
The sorry.
Life,life can come,and life can go.
The days,hours,minutes slowly dissolving my exstance.
Like clay shattered on the pavement.
The tourture of the thought.
Do I like it or do I hate it?
The tears that I hide behind my eyes.
The pain in my thought won't go away.
The pain won't lessen.
The pain just won't fade away.
2~28~10 <3
why are they all so sad
but still they are really good
Its good but it lacks continuous rythym (PLEASE TAKE NO OFFENCE IN THAT)
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York
Cuz I was going throught a ruff time so I wrote about it nd this is the result
@geordieboy-That is exactly what I thought,I just posted cuz I wanted to see what ppl would think.Thnx
2~28~10 <3
well its happy now!
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