Poems

[Emo234]

good

[LovelyUndeadVam]

i can't write happy poems. sorry. sad or depressing poems have more meaning.

Smile.
Laugh.
Keep the lie from being exposed.
Wake up.
Put on make-up.
Try not to cry.
Compose that careful mask.
Don't let the true identity show.
No one cares.
Keep that lie from being exposed.
Look into their eyes.
They can't see.
Blind.
Severed from life.
Personal hell overtakes.
Friends?
Lies.
The lie is being exposed.
No light.
No sound.
No love.
Nothing.
Black.
Get ready.
You're entering my world now.

[Clank]

Cool poem

[LovelyUndeadVam]

thank you.

[Emo234]

wow that's my life right there lol,really good luv

[LovelyUndeadVam]

thanks.

[Clank]

Ok so here is my next one, i think it is loads better than my first

I lie awake.
I tremble.
I shudder.
I make my point.
But it gets lost in the fray.
I tighten my threads and fasten my lace
I pace the walk of fame,
up the street and out into the open
The welcoming doors pull you in
the echoes of pain drag you in
a day of suffering, a day of pain
Thats what it is.
Thats what it is.
The walk of fame lights up my path.
Enter the door i do and pace up the steps.
I fall, i never stop, i keep falling, i drop.
The fall was long.
Thats what it is.
Its me, my life, day after day

[LovelyUndeadVam]

! wow that was really good too Geordie!

[Clank]

Not to be big headed but i thought that was good but my first one was rubbish

[LovelyUndeadVam]

naw it's not big headed. i know my poems are good because i've been writing the same stuff for years, but i'm just to modest to say that kind of stuff. even now i want to deny what i just said. and your first one WAS good! no worries.