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    good
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    i can't write happy poems. sorry. sad or depressing poems have more meaning.

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    Cool poem
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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    thank you.
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    wow that's my life right there lol,really good luv
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    thanks.
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    Ok so here is my next one, i think it is loads better than my first

    I lie awake.
    I tremble.
    I shudder.
    I make my point.
    But it gets lost in the fray.
    I tighten my threads and fasten my lace
    I pace the walk of fame,
    up the street and out into the open
    The welcoming doors pull you in
    the echoes of pain drag you in
    a day of suffering, a day of pain
    Thats what it is.
    Thats what it is.
    The walk of fame lights up my path.
    Enter the door i do and pace up the steps.
    I fall, i never stop, i keep falling, i drop.
    The fall was long.
    Thats what it is.
    Its me, my life, day after day
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

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    ! wow that was really good too Geordie!
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    Not to be big headed but i thought that was good but my first one was rubbish
    New York!
    Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
    There's nothing you can’t do,

    Now you're in New York!
    These streets will make you feel brand new,
    These lights will inspire you,
    Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

    JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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    naw it's not big headed. i know my poems are good because i've been writing the same stuff for years, but i'm just to modest to say that kind of stuff. even now i want to deny what i just said. and your first one WAS good! no worries.
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