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    well, so do i, but that's because i'm in high school. i dunno, if you think you can handle it, go ahead. i'm just saying that i don't recommend it. doesn't mean it stops you. i'm just warning you.
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    Give me the page of a bad one and ill rate
    Trust me! Ill show you

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    Oh, well do i have to read allllll that?

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    well, if you want to rate the bad language. hahaha. you don't have to. it's just there for readers to enjoy.
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    Was joking
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    whats going on with the book, is it good so far
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    Chapter seven is up now. hope you all enjoy it cause it took me a while. (had to do a little thinking with this one )

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    Hi I have read this one (I skipped the second) And i am surprised by the amountof violence, language etc. BUT I THINK IT IS GREAT! I like "grown up" books and like this story. You should really send a letter in to Waterstones and ask them to publish it!!!


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    i'm liking this story!! it's awesome
    i agree with Geordie i think it's good enough to be published

    one question, why does time pass so quickly in the story? like sometimes it's like early in the morning and then it's suddenly midday

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