Talent Amass!!

[Maniac]

This is a thread, where you guys can post stuff that u made yourself!!
Like poems,jokes,thoughts,pictures,songs....
And other people can comment on it and tell whats lacking.

[Maniac]

A sweet poem by me...(Tell me if its good!!).

Love is bittersweet.
I will wait for the day we meet.
Till then ill cry all the time.
Baby you are the best and no one is more fine.

MY heart is broken,it has lost its warmth.
We will kiss and hug all day long.
Till the pain has gone.

I miss the smile,i miss the tear.
All thats left is fear.
Had we not done,what we did..
You and I would still be near.

Long gone are the days when the sun used to shine..
when i was yours and you were mine.
Everything's different and nothings same.
Life is just a lame game, without any aim.

I saw you once,i saw you twice.
I never thought that such was lives spice.

At last ,making a lasting statement
depositing a lives worth of repent
Life will end, death will come..
More so and some..
But the pain will never end.
But the pain will never end..........................

[doglover]

Hey Maniac. That poem is awsome...very touching.
My opinion...I loved it!!!

[Maniac]

ThAnKs...
YoU aRe So NiCe.
BuT cOmE oN.
YoU tRy SoMeThInG tOo...

[Maniac]

Hey,,,, now i have a rap song!!!(Tell me how u feel!)

They called me a cheat,
Lets meet up,lets beat em.
Lets make some heat.

<<deleted due to inappropriate content>>

Lifes good.
You are just a wolf ,
in sheeps hood.

Don't ditch me,
it hurts a lot,
we'll lie down on my cot,
and make love and make out.

This is no prank,
i am from no gang.
I got no gun,which goes bang bang.

She looks so cute,
like a 100% off loot.
I like the way she move,
it was my sorta groove.

Why did i see her,
i am now under the control,
of her pretty eyes,like big black coals!!!

[Mistery]

Just a reminder: the posts must follow the rules, this thread is no exception.
http://gamershood.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1607

[Maniac]

Hey,srry,just slipped my mind.
Wont happen again....honest!!!!!!1

[doglover]

Maniac, do you like Eminem?

[Maniac]

He is not my favourite.I listen to him sometimes!!Actually im not even into rapping and stuff like that.
Im more into HIP-HOP etc

[bige92]

my yoshi song

just something i thought of

yoshi is the best, he's not blue thu,
so, yo, let's go,

if u want to know my fav heres wat u gota do,
go to yoshi & say bige, 9, 2,

yoshi is my man,
& i've come to say,
that i love him in, every way,
even every minite of the day,

boshi is the cool 1,
he's the blue 1,
& he's here to say
yo u guys get outa my way

i love yoshi, & u better not forget,
u can put that on a 1000 doller bet,
that i love yoshi, boshi, doshi, coshi !!!

happy yoshi boshi doshi coshi

[Spacechild399]

Heeeheehee, nice one!

[Maniac]

just something i thought of

i love yoshi, & u better not forget,
u can put that on a 1000 doller bet,
that i love yoshi, boshi, doshi, coshi !!!

Hey , another rapped amidst us..(i hope that made sense..lol)

[Spacechild399]

Don't worry, it did!

[bige92]

added a bit

[Spacechild399]

You made it even better!